No.9631
>>9628Practice gesture.
Neck is too thick
Legs need to be wider at the ends.
Practice hindgelegs.
Study wings.
Study rainbow's tail and mane.
Ears should be a bit longer.
Try shading.
No.9653
I have no idea what went wrong but it looks bad…
No.9655
Well, Lyra's front legs are a little short, and Twilight's front right leg looks a little misaligned (too far forward)
and Lyra's face actually doesn't look too bad. I would suggest studying the legs of real horses to get a feel for how their legs should be bending.